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Hey folks. I just want to say that I’m sorry this is so short. I will be sitting down today and starting on the next chapter. I will make sure it is a lot longer with some actual story to it. Their will likely not be any sex in the next chapter as I try to build up where I’m hoping to go with the story. Hopefully it’s not too shit. Thank you for making the effort to read.

You’re off to a good start. Good sentence structure, spelling is good and the fact you are in the Sci Fi area makes me want to see where you take us.

Looking forward to what comes next.