by AsheramL
i can understand now why you said the story would jump the shark this chapter is something out of a horror story hope the girls can get out of this situation
What a twist. I am eager to see where this goes. Don't keep us waiting too long
Been loving this serie until this chapter, was just something that did not feel right about it.
I can understand the whole darker plot thing but the "turn girls into fuck toys" is not something im interested in.
With that said I will give the upcoming chapter a chance to see how the story evolves.
I really hope you dont take this in a bad way your story and writing is amazing but as stated this chapter is not for me.
Good luck!