All Comments on 'Critical Response Ch. 05'

See, I want to know what shoes I'm wearing there. Was I *completely* hidden by the tablecloth?

I can neither confirm or deny your footwear or clothing choices. Or the existence of clothing at all at that point. You could fill in those details but you only have 750 words to do it

Busy right now. Still got forty words left and I'm not going to waste them on comments when Fiona's pussy is just so gorgeously wet and I just want to drown in it and... oh.

Rotfl... Loved the play with @alinax 750 word stories. But, what will your Lily and Kayla do? A chill just went up the metaverse's spine.

What a great story!! Such a cool premise!! Loved it!!! 5-stars, for sure!!!!!

I loved Wonderland and can’t wait for your next storyline. You are an excellent writer.

This is an absolutely brilliant concept!

I love the idea of characters having free will and being able to influence things however they wish. Thank you so much for sharing it!

Oh this is really great.