All Comments on 'Crocodile Tears'

by coldamaranthine

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
i love it

It was just amazing,it is lovely kind of romantic and exciting!!! Nice work!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Croc Tears

Though I would have prefered more details of the act, I liked your story.

It's too bad some readers feel the need to criticize everything they see. If your grammar was slightly off, who cares. My favorite response to such criticism is to ask how much the critic paid for the pleasure of the reading.

I look forward to more of you stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Clever idea

I like the idea of how she captures him. Different to most 'seduction' stories.

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