All Comments on 'Crossing Moon Ch. 12'

Enjoying following the story but the dialog is just a bit too stilted to have it flow properly,or maybe it's just that they all sound so young and self centered. A bit too much angst and yelling, it'd be good to have some more fleshing out of characters. I'm sure you'll get there though, appreciate the effort.

I so don't wanna alvine to mate with ynannie or whatever her name is lol. this story so drama filled but it'll be interesting to see the finish.

I am always thrilled when you have a new chapter up. I love this story. I am very interested to see how this is all going to end. LOL. What a mess the characters are in. LOL. I am still cheering for Alven and Carrie to end up together. Keep up the great writing!

ahhh.... you are making me so frustrated with your writing. its just too good and i just cant wait for the next one. you got me so addicted that i just come on to see if you wrote anything new. and let me tell you that's hard to do. Use those talented hands of yours and write faster. i beg of you! keep up the fantastic work.

Please stop with this interim chapters. I'm getting sick of the whole story, just because of the way you keep ending your chapters.

Hi all. Jayleen here... I'm actually almost done in writing Chapter 13 and yes, it will be mostly based on Max and Aveline... But I have to take a break for some time because of school (I got a LOT of assignments and tests to do), but if I could, and if I finish the chapter during my free time, I might just post it or just hold it until I've done the series... so, what do you guys think? Thanks all for being so supportive! And to the previous comment, I'm sorry if you are annoyed with how I kept on ending the chapter with cliff-hangers but that is just how the story flow.

they are made for each other. let alven realize he has feelings for her and stop her from getting mated. can provide a reason for the pack to be rescued from whatever that sam guy is planning

i love this but i also agree with everyone else i am also think alven and carrie should be together

the cliff hangerr =] it keeps me thinking of whats gunna happen next.. and i also agree with some alven and carrie belong togetherr =] cant wait till the next posttt xD

The diary entries as a stylistic device to express the "inner world" of a charachter is an ambigous thing. It may be a way to gain more authenticity, but it also holds the danger to bring superfluous and deplorable flat and shallow thoughts up.

You have made a quite captvating story and i strongly encourage you to make "bold" decissions in the further progression. I guess most of us want harmonic happy endings, but keep in mind life has no endings except death. As long as you live, life goes on. Some regrets are like beacons for the development of an upright character.

i love your stories please finish

it's soo good

im soo waiting on whats gunna happen next.. =] plzzz write more soonnn xD

please your making this too good to wait . please give us more. Your the writer but like the rest i leaning for carrie & alvin.

This is seriously the best in the series. Can't wait for the next chapter.

your suspense skills are amazing and you are doing very well considering that english is not your first language. Thank you and please dont leave us hanging much longer ;)

Hi all! Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and votes... I did continue the series (it's not finish yet) but everything has to be put on hold. I still have to focus on my uni report and exams lol...I'll post up the new chapters as soon as semester break comes. Thank you all once again for being so supportive and patient with me... Really appreciate it! :D

this is an awsome story

Hi all... Been getting a lot of emails about the new chapters lately, thanks for being so patient with me during my school term lol. Ok, so I'm back, semester break's finally here... To answer some of the emails regarding when I'm going to continue writing the series, well, I've posted two new chapters a few days ago and it should be approved soon. So I hope that you guys will love the new chapters just as much as my editors and I do....