All Comments on 'Cuckold Son Watches his Mom'

Whoa!! How about getting an editor. I couldn't read it past the first few sentences.

Please, no more.

Horrible, poorly written drivel

No imagination and you need an Editor!!

Grammar. It's your friend

Absolutely awful

Written by a child

It would have been helpful to put "gay sex" in the tags. That way I would have known this is not for me. I stopped reading soon as he jerked off his friend in the pool. A true writer, doesn't let the shackles of grammar stifle one's creativity. And for that alone I give you 5 stars.

Not sure it's in the correct category with that much same sex content.....and on top of that, very poorly written.

If you love black cock you love the story….

Poorly written. Too short. Needs more to it and much more editing. Plot premise is okay--that's why it's two stars instead of one. Next time, take your plot idea and work on it much more.

Is this what happens when you use AI to write a story?

Yeah. Love the theme, but not written well at all. Choppy and no pacing at all. Too quick from A-Z in like 3 paragraphs.

WAY TOO SHORT

Like the idea, but written by a middle schooler that failed grammar class and doesn't know there is a spell checker.