by NauticalTwilight
Outstanding. 5 stars of sexual adventure for consenting adults doing what they choose to do. Fun nasty fucking. Keep them rocking on. Cheers.
Another masterpiece. I cant wait for the continuations. You really know this genre, your writing is excellent. I came multiple times to this story. I am looking forward to whatever humiliations are in store for Ben next. This was sooo hot. Thank you
Oh my god extremely hot! I love the contrast to the very sweet cucking in The Rule. Can’t wait for the next part!
You hit it out of the park again Naut! Great story. Unique way to introduce the bull. Also all the nerdy guys that read this will love the Tifa cosplay. Keep ‘em coming.
Sorry everyone, pretty bad copy/paste error on page 4. First few lines from the start get repeated. Will work on fixing it as soon as I can!
Another great work of art! The SPH is really my weakness, but your work is phenomenal
"The rule" is a great story, so maybe I expected too much. This story feels like it was written too fast. I did a word count on the word "Massive": 18 times. It started to annoy me. It all just feels way over the top. And the characters feel like copies of "The Rule". The cocky bull (Mark), the hot girlfriend (Chrissy) and the beta cuck (Kevin). The only thing missing is a Beth-like character who makes sure the cuck gets some too. And it lacks way more depth and development.
I would like to encourage you to write a non-cuckolding story. Try different dynamics. You have a way with words, you know how to build a story, but your storylines are too fixed on the cuckolding and all the sterotypes that come with it. Take your time and use your creativity. Good luck and please keep trying.
Looking forward to chapter 2. Different from your other work, great job at switching it up.
One of my favorite stories I’ve read on this site, when’s part 2 coming I can’t wait.
Loved this story a LOT, Scarlett was super hot. Also idk if it’s just me but I find the cuckold thing super hot but I also want the relationship to stay in tact (cause I’m a vanilla at heart) so once I get the post nut clarity I’m like “aw man that sucks” but they stayed together so it’s nice
FANTASTIC,my wife is fucking our roommate.All 9”
I am lucky enough to participate sometimes.
Sucking his big cock before and after and feeding on his delicious cum after he fucks her.
Amazing story, I was very confused at the start of page 4 though. For everyone else, skip the first paragraph or so of page 4 down until "Ben doesn't have what you need?"
AMAZING! Erotica at its best! This had me hard the whole way and on edge! Don’t listen to the nay sayers. It’s an erotica site after all. Sometimes there doesn’t need to be pages of a back story! Please keep writing!
Love it!
other similar stories to this one would be great because you seem to have a great mind for this genre!
Hot as fuck! Perfect detail on her hot body and each and every move to making her into his slut! Very well done senor...