All Comments on 'Cuckolded Cutie'

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ell451390ell451390over 2 years agoAuthor
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Hi, everyone! This is my first story so please let me know what you felt about it and help me improve. I will be adding more chapters to this soon.

GarySmith69GarySmith69over 2 years ago

This is a 'loving' relationship? Really? These are your characters but I can't help thinking they need to let each other go.

LovecutefeetLovecutefeetover 2 years ago

It is a good start. Women deserve great sex lives with lotsa variety. This will end wel, with him loving her and she loving him in her heart, but still fucking hunks. Maybe he can learn to love creampie. Not all males are jealous patriarchs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Look you wrote really well, but in the end it went way too toxic i mean wth i even know that some people are so desperate in real too that they can fake medical emergencies

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

a piece of shit, not even 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 hours ago

I think its great that our heroine loves one male with all her heart, but gives her sweet hairy twat meat to a stronger, more aggressive male. Its only natural for cunt to get what she needs, and cunt needs love and lust. A girl deserves to get fucked hard and rub it in the lesser man's face.

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