All Comments on 'Cultivating Lilly Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

good story so far. Love the way Lily is slowly changing. Can't wait for your next chapter to see if they get caught or actually what Cassy talks her in doing next. this is just a suggestion, don't put the "the end" after each chapter leave that for the end of the story, If you want to put something there just say to be continued. Thanks for sharing your fantasy with us.

Pappasleaze!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’m obsessed with how this has progressed. Next chapter please!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent third instalment. You're really developing the characters well and like the nudism exhibitionism direction given her conservative up bringing creating some nice emotional and sexual tension to the chapter. .

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Over the course of several years I have written a story about a female character during three distinct times of life: Her sexual awakening in her late teens, her time spent as a sex slave in her 20s, and her life as a married woman. As a young writer, I was drawn to the erotic...

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