All Comments on 'Curiosity Ch. 03'

That was worth waiting for , boy you can write a cliff hanger dread :)

that was so good cant wait for the next chapter

My gosssshh! The scene was so intensed!This story is worth waiting for and im beggin' you to write chapter4 imediately,pretty please??

Great story so far, all three chapters.

where the hell is chapter 4? i can't wait any longer!

Ch4???

Oh ye gods! This story is absolutely scintillating and left me desperate for many more (longer) chapters. Please hurry because I don't think I can wait too long :))

CHAPTER 4 I NEED YOU!!!!!

WHERE IS CHAPTER 4 GOD DAMMIT!

Chap 4 please !!!please

This is a beautiful and really well written story, please continue it as soon as you get the chance. It's really gripping how you write, nothing sexual has occured and yet it makes me want to read it more than any other story here. Brilliant, keep it up! :)

Chapter 4!!!!! You can't just leave us hanging!

come on chap 4 plzz you can't just leave people hanging like this is one of the best stories i have read on here

wtf!!! Chapter 4 pleassseeeee!!!

What are you waiting for!? Finish! I relate so much to this story.

this is one of the best stories on here chap 4 please do you have any idea how painfull it is to wait after a hanger like that

Don't leave us all hanging like this.

at the beginning of the story you said the next will be done in two days. It has been two months what the hell are you waiting for !!!???

This part, glad I checked it out. But What happened? Where's the other story? Please post it SOON. :)

POST IT. PLEEEEASE.

I know life gets busy and stories have to be put on hold, but you have an amazing gift. I fell in love with your story since the first day I read all your work because I enjoyed it so much. I hope you finish this next part soon because your killing your fans over here. You have a wonderful thing going and we don't want to see it end. Thank you for all you do you really should look into writing stories for a living I'm sure a lot of us can agree that we'd buy them and you couldn't keep up with the pace of how quick we read them because we love your writing so much. Thank you for allowing me to read this much so far, can't wait for more!

Still waiting. Hurry, please?

Your story makes me think about my life and the choices I made. I am glad I am not the only one that goes through something like this. Thanks for writing. I hope you continue because it helps me as well. :)

Where's the rest of it !? Talk about a cliffhanger..

OMG PLEASEEE PLEASE PLEASE POST THE REST

Omg u have to finish this its killing me!..please?!

This is a brilliant story you need to finish it!!!

WRITER wanted to finish this story...Freelancer mentions in her note in The RA that if someone wants to finish this story they are welcome to.... So please, read the existing chapters and see what you can do... Lots of us would super appreciate it.

Um i might actually lose my mind if this story doesn't continue

HOW CAN YOU STOP WRITING THERE!? PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!! LOL

Omg.. please finish this story! i bet it's killing everybody too lol

OK. I'm hooked and ready for the next chapter if possible. Please let them somehow get them together forever.

Really really reaaaalllyyy good story. Please please finish this

If this story was printed, it would be a real page-turner. Very human characters, drama-aplenty, cliff-hangers to get the reader all tensed up. In a word, a great tale. So where's the rest? It's more than two years since you said that Chapter 4 would be here in a couple of days. I've heard of writer's block (even suffered it sometimes) but this is ridiculous. Please, Freelancer, put us out of our misery!

Please please finish this!!! And let them make beautiful love and be together forever!!

Please finish this one.. it was a very good story. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

why do some authors write stories and leave them unfinished ... i lose all respect for them ...

I hope you are not going to leave us hanging like this, we want to know what happens next

Pleaseeeeeee....finish the story, dont leave us hanging....

Finish it......ffs

Noticed its been a LONG time so mayb uve had enuff, but fir the readers of this story. U should finish it.. but properly not rushd. Cheers

Yes it's too bad the author didn't finish this series. I just read all three chapters and would have been great if it had been continued. I did love it though.

Curiosity killed the cat but it just may get Jamie back (with Bethany). I'm trying not to get too excited because freelancer722 has not written a sequel to this amazing story in some time. But I will say (again), I can't thank anonymous enough for blowing the whistle on the person who tried to plagarize the story and for posting a link to the original ones. Look what I would have missed out on - a masterful piece of writing. Albeit, the author confused Emma & Jamie's names, but hey, even that couldn't damper the immense like I have for the series. Perhaps a conclusion is in the near future. But I won't hold my breath.

God, isn't it frustrating and annoying (and quite common on this site) when an author leaves us with a cliff-hanger on a decent story and then seems to disappear for ever. Come back Freelancer722, if only to finish off 'Curiosity' and set our minds at rest over the outcome.

It's been four years since this last chapter. I've read this series several times already and have always been hoping it could be finished. Very good series.

Come back and finish the story I'm dying over here!!!

Holy hell come back and finish this story..I’m hanging by a thread now

PLEASE! Kindly finish the story!

you cant just leave us hanging. please continue!!!!!!

It is a damn shame this is left unfinished.

An unfinished story shouldn’t get more than a three. You quit on us. And you’re a good writer. A shame.

But then, I did the same thing on this site.