All Comments on 'Curse of the Dark Lord'

This was magnificently written in so many ways… I hope that its sequel, if there is one in the future, is as thoroughly spellbinding as its predecessor

No word on a sequel yet as this was a commissioned piece. The commissioner has expressed paying for a sequel in the future. Since it's their idea I don't want to progress the storyline until then.

This reads like just the first chapter of a longer story, dark and sexy.

Wow..great stuff

I hope more of this story is to come.

Loved it! Please continue!

Really well done, i just wish the girls where subject to some sort of transformation. I know it isn't very pleasant to compare writers but this reminds a lot of Kingmaker711's stories which I really recommend! Great Work!

Absolutely great! Corruption mind control and done so well! You should share it in my Discord. I will do so now, to try to get you more fans! I hope to see the story continue!

Love the focus on character and emotional drama with erotic seduction

This was fairly well done. To do it right, it should have been at least 30 pages, with much more plot and perversity. But thank you for even writing this much.

Excellent story, though I wish there was a sex scene with his whole family at the end as he embraces his destiny. Maybe you could write a sequel and that that?

Excellent start to a hot and intriguing story! If there is a sequel, which I very much hope happens, maybe go in a little more detail on the sex scenes and make them even hotter. Five stars!