by BellaStringer
Why does it seem like there are large chunks of this story missing? Both to give context and for descriptions.
Nothing not even chapter 2 in a year...ending just died left you hanging...what carp may give higher rating with 2nd or more chapters...BUT NOT NOW!!!!!!!!
This story has to be continued -- I've been reading stories on Literotica since 2001 and it's rare for a short story like this to be so hot. Please continue with this one....
I have plenty of guesses as to what's going on, but very little that is explained or makes sense. That being said, I hope that explanation comes in the form of another chapter.
Wow…..such a fun story and it proves you don't need 4 or 5 pages to pass your erotica to your readers! Thanks for sharing!