by Bokkey
I decided to comment on this chapter after I'd left it, but went back too far and commented on the previous chapter by mistake - but the comment was more general about the story as a whole up to this point. So no harm. I hope.
Ms Brendan is just getting started with Donna. Many more chapters to re-read to get the flavor of Donna's downfall. Hopefully the author will be able to complete the entire story.
Don't like the whipping of Donna but also don't enjoy the fact that Donna keeps fighting Ms. Brendan thus pissing her off. More description of Donna's tits, ass, legs, pussy would really help out with the story. Like the concept as hope that Donna falls completely for Ms. Brendan's form of sex.