by HOG57head
Narrative was a little clunky at times, but you brought the series to good spot. 4*
Somewhere in there is a decent plot——but everything else repeats and repeats (you get the idea). A minus 2would be generous.
5 more stars... still hanging in for the last chapters and the ultimate ending.
I expected the Mandy & Beth relationship to surface, as there were enough things done and said that made it clear the two women wanted him... and each other !
I hope we hear more about these three - I like where they are, now - and would LOVE to hear more about their future!
(Might have to change the name, since, you know, he does, now... )
Good ending, but not any consequences for the cheaters. Would have been a great 3 chapter story. Still, it ended right. 5/5
You make no sense.
The wife is clearly a for shit actress since she can't even act like a halfway decent wife.
That being said, she's upset he *knows* she's a whore or slut and didn't want a divorce (at least until she saw the lengths he went to fuck her and her lovers over). But that begs the question of why would she cry?
He believes she hates him and she gives no reason to believe otherwise but she in any way CARES?
Unless she's completely schizo you really need an explanation for her actions before and *on* Christmas day.