by Sorian
Should've kept the story to just the father and daughter and not have them get married. It was 5* up to that point but just became average after that. 3*
I agree you should of had kept it just the father and daughter. Bring in other people just ruined the story. If you write another fater daughter story keep just them!!
I loved it but only the two of them it also would be nice if her father knocked her up and they never stop having sex