by Michael456
Hot story but I'm sure I've read it before years ago. The current author may be in cahoots with the president of MIT
I think that concealing the father's involvement was stretched out too long Chloe would have had an inkling anyway, from her father's smell, even though he had had a bath recently.
That said the story maintained a nice momentum and I wanted to read to the end. And, like all good stories, I wanted to know what happened next.
@rarevos ....Well, aren't you a detective of the century, jumping to conclusions without a shred of evidence? Maybe you've read a similar story because, shocker, themes get recycled. Accusing the current author of being in cahoots with the president of MIT is a wild leap into the realms of baseless conspiracy. Try enjoying the story for what it is, and if you can't, keep your imaginative accusations to yourself.
One of the better stories I've read in a while! It was so good that I read it all and wanting to know what happened next! hehe left a taste to read more of this story.