All Comments on 'Daddy and I Ch. 01'

business?

The capital W and O denotes a Dominant while the lowercase denotes a submissive.

To Teddybear: Check your editing and grammar. There were a few minor errors.

There missing commas and full stops make it awfully awkward to read. Like someone was bubbling without stopping to breath. I got enough of it long before half way.

Also the while I know the reason for W/we style of writing, it breaks the natural flow of text and is not necessary even in BDSM stories.

This story is fucking HOT! Heading to read the 2nd part now.