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Strixalucoabout 1 year agoThere missing commas and full stops make it awfully awkward to read. Like someone was bubbling without stopping to breath. I got enough of it long before half way.
Also the while I know the reason for W/we style of writing, it breaks the natural flow of text and is not necessary even in BDSM stories.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIt's BDSM protocol.
The capital W and O denotes a Dominant while the lowercase denotes a submissive.
To Teddybear: Check your editing and grammar. There were a few minor errors.
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