by LilGrlBleue
Good. Keep it up. It will be interesting to see how you develop your style.
Well, I really liked it. There was not a lot of surprise, but rather an unfolding celebration leading to sweet release. I could visualize it all well as I read the story. Thank you and I hope you write more.
Your story is just as steamy and hot as the first time I read it! So happy to see it as a Literotica story.
Your story is sweet, simple and well-written. I loved it!! Please keep writing.