All Comments on 'Daddy Time'

Wowww ... what a great story ... MORE than 5 stars ... So sensual, erotic, slow and with words very well picked. Please go on. Can't wait for more of your daddy/daughter-stories to come ... Thanks for sharing ...

Lovely story enjoyed please continue with the story line.

Mums day out should have a forward reference to this.

WHY, does writers have such problems to make a easy way in TITLE of the story - to tell the reader that the story is about A CERTAIN part of a bunch of stories...

I suggest every writer that create a serie, To write:

"XXX" serie, Part number (a number), TITLE

just a thought - as this one:

"Jean - the Pet, Part 3; Daddy Time"

A third part was never intended. It almost wrote itself.

No, I don't like your title suggestion. Sorry!

Ausgirl66