by pinmeupgirl
The story was good, to a point. I like the fact that she knew her place. I liked that she understood the punishment factor of a BDSM relationship. I think however, that you could have explained to US what she did wrong and why she was being punished. And I will admit that I was a little confused by Him telling her that she's been a bad girl and after He's used her, suddenly she's such a good girl. Praise her for her obedience and for her being His property, but make sure she knows that she was bad but that He still loved her.
4 stars.
I'm sorry, but this was hard to read.....actually.....I did not read all of it.
Being a father......daughters were too precious to me......
I seem attraced to incest stories.....but father and daughter is just too much.
...actually not sure if thios was about a father and a daughter at all.
Not that it would make a huge difference, but the possibility that it s just a little look into a Daddy/babygirl relationship casts a different light on the things mentioned in the other comments.
At least in my book... ;-)
That was interesting and enjoyable, even if it was a little too much pain for my liking.
Good one. Especially if you deliberately played with the Daddy-concept and left it open wheter or not the is any kindredship involved. ;-)