All Comments on 'Daddy's Harem 0.5'

Interesting waiting to read. How much daughter figure out

great start keep it cumming

So many possibilities. Is Daddy going to make her his own? Will he be faithful to his daughter? Is he wanting to breed her since he wants to take her raw? Is he going to have this latest whore teach her how to please Daddy? And what about Mommy, how does she figure into all of this?

Would like the chapters to be a bit longer, but a good start to a D/lg series.

Minor typos were distracting, Please get a Beta Reader. You have started what could be a great story.

Devilishly hot! Congratulations on such a great beginning, and don't make us wait too long for next chapters!

Damn! That's one hell of a start. Welcome to Literotica.

Fantastic story. Keep it up please. It's rare for me to get off from a single story, but this one did it...

That ruled

That was hot! A quick question- are you working on the next chapter?

I'm curious why you asked for suggestions and comments if you had no intents to read them

Intense