All Comments on 'Daddy's Passion'

Confused

Were the last 16 paragraphs supposed to be attached? It appeared to be a brief outline of the story I had just read. Why have two versions of the same story in the same submission? I don’t get it. Aside from that, excellent. Characters well defined and appealing. I was glad to hear Angel and the others finally realized Rosie’s contribution, and appreciated her efforts. Thank you.

I would enjoy reading more about this little community.

@nthusiastic There were not supposed to be there, it was late and I was tired when I submitted it, I'll see it I can get that corrected. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. Glad you enjoyed the story.

The story is now updated and is as it should have been posted the first time. I'll pay more attention next time I post a story.

Great story! Loved every bit of it.

Please continue the story!!!

More!!!

Very erotic. I liked the way the intensity of the relationship grew. It felt real.