All Comments on 'Daddy's Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

OK story but proof read for clangers and typos before posting. Multiple grammar errors and misplaced words due to lack of editing even in the first paragraph

AlwaysDissingDaddiesAlwaysDissingDaddiesabout 1 year ago

I hate daddies, why daddies are sexy? They are not, old body is not sexy, it stinks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I hope we get a part 2!

FreakSlaveFreakSlaveabout 1 year ago

Very hot! Yes, typos galore, but I want more!

allsexstoriesallsexstoriesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. Will consider a part two :)

BrokenQuillBrokenQuillabout 1 year ago

Great story. Some tidying up needed here and there to make it read a bit better.

I wish I could have been like Mario when I was younger. Now I would be happy to meet him!

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 1 year ago

Very hot and sexy story. When I was 18 I was really into daddies. In fact daddies were almost exclusively who got to fuck my ass except for a few transgendered women. Your story is worth 10 stars…..

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allsexstoriesallsexstoriesabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks :) I know the grammar isn't amazing. It will definitely improve. Glad you enjoyed it :) :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very hot story and great descriptions of vigorous, proud and tender gay sex…really well done…Thanks so much…

smoothed273smoothed273about 1 year ago

💖💖💖💋💋💋💋✌

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