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by IllyHymen

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EmilysJournalEmilysJournalalmost 4 years ago
This seems like the start of something interesting.

This seems like the start of something interesting. I can see a lot of different directions this story can go. I hope that I will see a continuation of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Way too short

Need to develop longer stories and put more effort than a "wham, bam, no thank you mam" story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Schlecht….jedes mal guter Anfang, dann

Ende zu unausgereift und zu Schnell am Höhepunkt dann abrupt Ende. No way. Jedes mal? Total Bullshit Schreibweise. Schlechteste Benotung.

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Illy Hymen is the author of The Little Goblin Girl and The Storm Mage, both of which are currently available on Amazon. She works professionally as a ghostwriter and editor when guys aren't paying her to beat them up. https://www.amazon.com/Illy-Hymen/e/B07MHWP434 She has wr...

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