All Comments on 'Dale's Women Ch. 12'

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AlwayysReadyy71 over 3 years ago

Dale is one lucky guy! I wish he was my first...

Greekfire859 over 1 year ago

Love the story, but how did Dale pick Bethany up at her apartment, drive to dinner, then drive back to his house, only to have Bethany driver herself home? Little hole in the plot. The rest….excellent!

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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