All Comments on 'Dana's First Married Affair'

by thunderhead12

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
In hindsight

Quote: "In hindsight, I have wondered for long time if her motivation to have sex with him was for pleasure, or an effort to enhance my career?"

In hindsight...you need a brain cell or two...lol, that last sentence was too funny.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Who is Harry? Is he the boss that drove the

cheaters in his van? You seemed to have left out this one little important bit of info..You said that your boss drove you two to the party then almost in the next sentence he is Harry without any explainations form you. Ohhh sorry you left that up to the reader to decide if he was Harry, just the same as you leaving it up to readers to decide if your story had maerit of not...It didn't . It stank...phweeeee

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Crap

This "story" would have to be 10 times better than it is for anyone to bother offering constructive criticism. It isn't worth anything in its present state.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
It wasnt for either of those, it was to humiliate

you and make you realize you are not enough of a man to be her husband. She wants you to work and make money to provide her with her physical needs but she wants a man/men to satisfy her need for sex. You are like a piece of furniture and without a brain to realize it. Hope you enjoy your new diseases she will bring home eventually.

BazzzBazzzover 16 years ago
Good story

You were very matter of fact in your description of what happened between the three of you that night. I am not sure if that was on purpose or not. Still the story was good. I would have liked to have read about some more emotion though, what were you feeling?, how about your wife's train of thought?

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Or

Or simply to be true to her nature as a whore.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
When

When you didn't kick Harry's ass for assaulting your wife, you became a cuck.

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