All Comments on 'Dancing in Lunar Seas'

Thank you. Very nice build up. You hinted at golden showers early on, I hope you develop that theme a little more between the two of them. It's one of the most intimate acts I can imagine, total trust and total acceptance.

Great title and one of the best stories I've read here in quite some time. Good characterisation and some nice literary flourishes. I agree with the first comment that a second instalment with Allie helping Kirstie explore a few of her kinks in a loving eviroment and perhaps Allie discovering a few of her own would be most welcome. Also Kirsties bff relationship with Jen could be explored as it was the one part of the story that seemed a little rushed. Brilliant debut. Hope you write more and soon. 5 stars

Just an AMAZING story! Wonderfully crafted with more emotional and sensual meat on the proverbial bone than most of this ilk. I was hoping for the mom to devour the daughter's ass as she jilled to her stripping. I think it would have steamed up the entire scene with a nice twist.

I hope to certainly see more M/D theme with writing this good from our new author here!

Sublime, please write more. X

Great stuff, I appreciate the time you took to build everything up to a very excellent payoff. Very good characterizations, and excited to see someone creating new m/d content!