by alexxxis
Good story! I think there is definatly scope to extend this one as you have such a hot subject to work with!
The only thing that made me a little yuck was the Osmonds thing. I can understand the Julianne and Derrick thing bc they're both smokin', but Osmonds?? I get it, though, and it was worked very well into the story.
Nice story, but I would have ended it differently. Instead of Donny and the rest of the Osmonds being with Marie, I would have had all the male participants of DWTS end up fucking Marie, in effect giving her a 12 guy cream pie! Then the stars could have a gambling pool, where they all gamble on who will end up being the father of Marie's ninth baby!
Loved the story; but what? Nobody even touched Cheryl's ass?
that Literotica would only allow comments from named/nicknamed members. I think the bitterness and hateful comments from jealous authors would subside. Hope the authors themselves ask for this change in policy from the managers of this site. Now about the story - This was the last of Alexxxis' stories that I have to read as of 10/25/2011 (I thought the first one was my last so my comment there was wrong). It is fitting that this Final Orgy was also my last of Alexxxis' stories, and it was really different, much more graphic, more raw sex, and almost as if it were a different author than any of the others. It still had the themes of celebrates that we might know (I don't watch Dancing With The Stars, so I knew only a few of the characters and that limited my initial involvement with the plot and story line.) and fantasy about what they might do in a very sexual situation. There was much imagination here, but somehow I didn't enjoy this story as much as the others. I'm glad it was my last one of the author's production, and I'm looking forward to new ones. Again, I thank this and other authors for providing provocative and erotic fare for us who like to trip out on sexual fantasy.
I'm sorry I don't believe this was your story at all. It contained none of your humor none of your eroticism and none of your talent. Again I'm sorry I kind of wish I had not read this one. This was more along the lines of some of the crap I read of the other writers where 1 does 2, 2 does 3, 4 does 5. And those authors claim it to erotic. Yea rght..
I'm so tired of searching for stories where characters talk. Dialogue brings you deeper into story and creates more vivid characters.