by MacSwain612
Fantastic story, a good mixture of romance and sex enhanced by the tentative way the love story unfolded.
Where is this resort?! :-)
very rarely do I ever write a comment. I loved this story and hope there is more to cum. Beautiful story!!!!
Has to be one of the best stories I've read here. Could actually see the hot and loving action like it was really occuring. Had me hard and wishing it were me in Calvin's roll with Danielle. Definitely a 5+++. Thank you for your story and looking forward to more in the future 👍😋
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I think it was the longest, single part, story I've read here and it was well worth the time! Please write more like it and of these two characters.
Wonderful story! Could use some editing but those little faux pas did nothing to detract. Always wanted to have a relationship with a sweet trans lady.
You made me cry you prick. Thats one beautiful story. I've read hundreds of stories here and none have brought that reaction from me until this one. Very very well done.
Thank you,
Toni
Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!! Probably the best straight man/trans woman story I’ve read here in a year! (There are too few of them, IMHO. . .)
But. . .
No trans woman on HRT produces prodigious volumes of semen, nor do they have huge balls. Artistic license is one thing - jumping the shark is another.
Still, however, a brilliant story!
Some minor gaps in the plot and hick ups in wording and grammar, but still good to read and very nice story.
This was an amazing story. I am turned off by the shame and humiliation that some people think need to be in a transgender story. I would much rather read about love and acceptance. Great job. 10 out of 5 stars
What an incredibly beautiful piece of literature. The backstories and the fear came across as completely real. I can only imagine what that would be like and I am sure it is not even close to what most actually feel. This story ran through almost every emotion and at times it was very difficult to read through the tears. I loved this story and applaud your talent and creativity as an author. Thank you so much for writing and posting this intensely real feeling story.
J.D.
Thank you for such a positive story . I hope you carry on the story so beautifully and positively . Thank you again xxx
Great story but unrealistic that she would be on strong HRT but get erections easily and cum heavily. After a month, most of us only drip a few drops of clear fluid when orgasming and have a very hard time keeping an erection if we can get one.
I gave it 4 out of 5 just because the exclamation of I Love You after a day or two, makes it seems like it’s more I Lust For You and once the high of this new relationships buzz past they would re-assess there true feelings.
I so loved this story, it was romantic and erotic and well written.
Now where is this little hide away lodge?? LOL
Fabulous, sensuous & beautiful story, hopeful i get to read so much more, part 2 would be equally fabulous 👍
What a beautiful story. Okay writing, but magical characters.I would love to know about their life together going forward.
I almost never read multiple chapter stories but I read this one though to the end. You are a very talented story teller and I enjoyed this one very very much. Thank you for sharing your basic writing talent and for the eroticism you weaved into each part.
If not the best story on the site, it has to be in the top 3. Character development and storyline was great. Made me want to be Calvin.
This is the kind of story which requires a 5+ button. A 5 star and a favourite will have to suffice.
Oh man that was incredible, haven't had a story that great in a while. The demure Danielle and Calvin fit so well together. Kind of want more, maybe a sequel where they meet Carol and John again as a couple and thank them, but this was perfect as it is too
Beautiful Story, I couldn't put it down until I Finished it
Well written I just wished I was Danielle the Story is so
Beautiful
One of the very best, if not the best, in this and all the other Literotica categories.
Excellent construction and attention paid to spelling, grammar and formatting.
All make an appreciable difference to the flow of the text.
Most enjoyable and sympathetic.