All Comments on 'Danielle and David Ch. 03'

David's mom answered the phone, right? Wow, will they ever met and get this problem straightened out?

This is just getting boring and pick up a dictionary and learn the difference between breath and breathe, you used the wrong one!

I am really enjoying your story please update soon.

I dislike people who have comments but hide behind Anonymous..Author a looking for sound advice not childless comment, which are not helpful.

VickiVale please update soon. Your biggest fan

anonymous is nitpicking on common mistake that half the world makes. If the story is boring why are you reading it, and making comment that show your true colors.

You feedback is neither helpful or positive but was it meant to make person quit writing on this site. Why hide behind Anonymous?

Vicki, please continue with your story, I do see vision that is coming to the forefront. I love the story

To OAKLAND!! I loved seeing Highland mentioned. I love my city!