All Comments on 'Daniel's Gift!!!'

I stopped reading after the first paragraph. Is there a story prior to this? If so, please let us know.

Hot to read about their fun together.

Well, I carried on regardless of the missing intro, and loved every bit of this all too short story. Currently my mind tells me my head is being straddled by a pair of thighs cradling my wife's sperm-laden well-fucked pussy. Thanks!

"So, for the next few days, there was a lot of guilty feelings and worry. "

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So, you think your stories are so magnificent everyone is just supposed to know what was the preceding chapter?

Next chapter

A bit hurried, perhaps, but then I guess just has effect on guys.

Hafta agree with Whirling Dervish- a brief introduction with reference to any previous relevant chapters is always helpful.

Missing the beginning of the story made it hard to get into. The concept was good but it was very difficult to figure out who was actually speaking at times> There was a Jen throughout until the end when all of a sudden there was a Joe. You need a proof reader.

Liked the story but it was too short and like most it was one and done you need to continue 4 stars

Fantastic. What a good horny mommy.