All Comments on 'Danni's Anniversary Holiday Dabble'

Is it time for Dani to run away from David?

Beautifully sensual, intensely erotic and sadly poignant. Suspect Danni-Samantha a one time pleasure as you say — no happy ending. Maybe more of Danni — potentially intriguing character. David — less so; more a foil, not to overthink your well crafted erotic piece.

Cool! A massage story with a happy ending that didn't lead to a story's happy ending. Nice change of pace. 5*'s

Long description sometimes repetitive for a a short climax. Confused regarding the ending. The massage that Samantha performed was sexual regardless of the name "Yoni" - have heard it defined - definitely sexual. If this act is common for Samantha is she part of a prostitution ring? Can she really be in love? I know it's fantasy but the questions are in regards to the story. Not attempting to pass on moral judgement.

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it, this being my first story 😀

She wasn’t part of any ring, she genuinely falls a bit in love each time she massages a woman, she finds it easier to communicate through touch, she is a bit complicated and responds to who she is massaging in the best way she thinks they need, which might not be correct always, but she is quite perceptive, any that’s how I wanted her to be, but your right it’s just fantasy and thanks for the feedback much appreciated

Nice story...

I just wish there would be a follow on, that explores more of Danni's lesbian side..

Greetings

Belinda