All Comments on 'Dan's New Life 01: Mistakes'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Roses are red

Violets are blue, Dan is inside of you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Another winner

This is possibly the hottest of the series so far. I love the non-consent/reluctance aspect the most, the way the girls come up with increasingly inhumane games to torture Dan and leave him a sobbing, begging, desperate mess. Not ashamed to admit that my underwear is now plastered with my semen after I lost control near the end of the story! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Bravo

All I can say is: More, please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great

one of the best stories I’ve read. I love how girls torture dan with unfair games. looking forward to seeing how the blue balls will be filled with all the teasing and cbt of the next chapters.

esteban77esteban77about 3 years ago

So good! Please more!

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Been reading on here for a very long time, finally worked up the courage to try it out myself. I'm a quiet, submissive, creative guy whose kinks include: mind games, orgasm control, tease and denial, creative bondage, and creative, powerful, curvy, dominant women.

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