All Comments on 'Daria and Jack Pt. 01'

SO GOOD

This was a strong beginning. Please continue. Panther fan.

He's an abusive asshole but one whom I'd allow to abuse me:-) Would enjoy reading more...

Excellent start lets have more please.

I’m so fucking wet

Oh my gosh, more please!

I liked it and would love to see more.

This was hot and got me off, but the fact that he fucked her pussy right after fucking her ass threw me off. Double dipping is no bueno. I had a guy do this to me twice. It left me with yeast infections and a UTI.

It was a great story and nothing I would change. I'm waiting for chapter 2 3 4 5...

There is a lot to like in your story. However, I have to agree with some other comments that the foul language and abusive behavior escalated quickly. They didn't seem to belong in a story of seemingly simple, mutual attraction.

This is the HOTTEST story I have ever read on this site! The moment he called her a dirty name i came. Lost count of how many times after that. This is every womans secret fantasy!

It's rare I comment on anything but I really like your writing on this piece. Write another!

Even for 5 min any REAL father would never do it. I would not let the house out of my line of sight even if they were sound asleep.

True story: I was smoking crack while my 4 yr old son slept in his room. I ran out but still had money and the thought just crossed my mind that I could be back in less than 15 min and he would never know (he NEVER woke up in the middle of the night from the age of 2 months).

Instantly I admonished myself for even thinking of leaving him alone because something could happen (like a fire) or to me while making the drug deal (crack dealers are not the most scrupulous people after all)...

Less than 5 min later I hear my boy crying from his bedroom begging me "... don't leave me alone daddy..."

Over 20 years later that memory STILL tears me up inside. But at least I had made the right decision already.

loved it because:-

no anal mouth ✔️

he scored 2/3 virgin holes of her but still didnt humiliate het with atm

he asked for her consent b4 anal✔️

in most of the stories the girld are shocked and unprepared by noncon anal but atleast he gave her a chance to back off

what i hated :-

he used no lube ❌

first time anal he should had used some baby oil or vaselin atleast pussy juice aint enough

anal to vagina❌

no corncern for her health if she gets fungal infection she will alone have to face the consequence he wont have any problem

too rough anal❌

dude its her first time if he aint using lube the least he could have been gentle it wasnt his first time but it was hers

treating her as a slut ❌

she is a sweet girl having crush on him why call her dirty names she is not the only one with lust he is even dirtier than her he cheated on his wife and defiled a naive virgin little girl ,he aint a saint she desrves respect for her honesty and submission she cares about him and the kids thats quite rude of him to call her a slut just bcoz she is a normal sexual being .she has feelings for him only she aint sleeping around