All Comments on 'Dark Division - Dani Ch. 03'

Let me be the first. Nice story, good plot, with great character development. Liked in much better that #02, however, one suggest for #03. It would be great if you had Danni coaxing a large turd out of Vince and smearing it on her face as an act of undying devotion. Just a suggestion.

I appreciate your comment, although I'm not sure it fits with the story. I do hope you keep reading though.