All Comments on 'Dark Pt. 04: Cumdumpster'

This comment is for "Dark" parts 1-4.

Though the "Dark" setup isn't one that usually attracts my attention, I enjoyed reading your story, Overall, it is well-written, decadent, and unapologetically edgy . The style and characterizations you employed remind me of Vanessa Duriès short SM novel "The Ties That Bind" ("Le Lien" in the original French). I think parts 1-3 were stronger than the 4th, where I noticed what struck me as a plot inconsistency, but that's the editor in me talking, and it didn't detract from the story.

I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for taking your time to give me feedback. My stories are an eclectic mix of fantasies and experiences. In hindsight, there's a couple changes I would have made to last chapter, but we might not agree on what:-)