All Comments on 'Darn Pictures Pt. 01'

by Elhotman

Sort by:
  • 17 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
GARBAGE

Read the first sentence. That was enough to know this is just another shit willing cuckold tale. Don't need to read any further.

SwordWielderSwordWielderover 3 years ago

Please add a warning at the beginning of your story that it is a cuckold story. Until Literotica has a separate category for cuckold stories, please warn the rest of us about the content your your stories. You will avoid negative ratings, and we won't waste our time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

One page....

Continued story....

No editor... (foul ball)

Cuck subject matter ...

THREE STRIKES - YEEEEEERRRR OUT!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please do this

Please warn us that this is a cuck story so we (MEN like me) won't waste our time mistakenly read your story. No I didn't read it all I just jumped from first paragraph to the last couple paragraph and then hit 1 star. Hoping for your consideration on my request.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 3 years ago

Part One is only 2300 words, about 2/3 of a Lit page? Why not post both parts together? If the second part isn't written yet, then posting this is an insult to the readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
How sick is it when a man gets all hot and bothered

just by showing a naked picture of his wife? Another scum cuck story. You won't fare well with this one. What's with the tag interracial? You do know there is a IR category? Why don't you read some of the "hall of fame" stories in this category if you want to know what reader's prefer. That is, if you got the balls to write an entertaining story, not just willing cuckoldry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Loved it

Really fucking loved it, screw the bad comments They should have stopped as soon as they realized it. I fucking loved it. Someone0148@gmail.com

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

This entire concept is an insult to the readers. Score it accordingly.

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

Wasn't actually sure it would go full gay/cuck....once it became clear I had to toss out a warning to others.

Impo_64Impo_64over 3 years ago

why get the wife in this? He found out he id gay and love cock...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Rocky62Rocky62over 3 years ago

Teenage BS fantasy and goes in IR which is mostly racist stereotypes

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Darned Pictures Pt. 01

"My name is Tony and I have been happily married to my wife Maria for over 20 years. Wear are both in our late 40s."

This quote says it all -- Doesn't know how to introduce characters, doesn't understand how to use contractions, and doesn't know how to proof-read.

Never mind the minus two, this is an ABSOLUTE ZERO.

SouthdownSouthdownover 3 years ago
YET AGAIN...

where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I love this story, please send more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
That's IT?

Great story. Simply...more please!!

becontree2001ukbecontree2001ukabout 2 years ago

Part 2 please. Great story

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It was very intenced,and it also reminded me of me with my wife,how we used to role play,and how good the sex was after we did.it got my cock hard several times as I was reading....

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userElhotman@Elhotman
Married, mid forties man who loves porn. I like most niches but don't really care for pain.