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naughty42naughty42over 6 years agoAuthor
Edited

Thank you, I've edited it to fix that overlooked error in continuity! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Nik333Nik333over 6 years ago
Well done

I enjoyed this story a great deal the only flaw is she was forbidden to wear a bra but did so anyhow and wasn't punished . Other than that small distraction you certainly pulled me into the story :)

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I'm submissive and enjoy writing stories based on my fantasies. Some of my stories are based on the fantasies of people I've chatted to online - I've taken the basics of their fantasy and worked it into an overall scene that I think I might enjoy. I find it's a useful way to ...