All Comments on 'Daughter home from University Pt. 05'

Two thing I'd like to point out. You often switch the names by mistake throughout the series. Sometimes Nicole becomes Fiona and vice versa. Also, people in group sex settings dont compare, at all. Its just not being done because its disrespectful. Nobody cares if an cock is an inch bigger or smaller, if you have b or c cups or how your vagina looks. Nobody likes to be judged for something they were born with and in erotica, constant comparison takes away from the story. Atleast when it happens 2 or 3 times in a piece with 1,6k words.

Thank you for your constructive critique. I will bear that in mind with future stories.

good story