All Comments on 'Dave And Amanda'

Good story. Two shy people who discover life.

Well done, please write many more.

Possibly a follow up to this one.

I liked it. Do another chapter.

...but you can't knock her up because you've already said she was on the pill so ignore that suggestion. Just write your next story about them exploring their new-found sexuality. Make it on a date or a week-end's stolen moments BUT DO NOT, under any circumstances, KNOCK HER UP! Let them explore each other's bodies &, maybe, have him fill up her other hole. Anything's possible... HEY, THEY'RE CURIOUS &, MOST OF ALL, they're HORNY!

Absolutely loved it....keep it romantic and sexual...don't make it a fuck session....make love...experiment with each other in a romantic sexual way...great story

A great start - and a great beginning to a series. As others have said, keep the intercourse down to a reasonable level and let romance and exploration of bodies and minds take their attention and keep our interest. They have the opportunities to explore dates, and cinema cuddling and dancing cuddling - and they can all end with sexual activity without every contact being an insertion!