All Comments on 'Dave's 20th Anniversary Gift Ch. 02'

I'm sure you can write a good story. This one, however, I do not like because of the underlying premises of "evil". This isn't just dominance anymore, it goes beyond and to hurt and that doesn't do it for me.

This really is awful. I only read the couple of paragraphs at the end and will not read another of your emissions.

You sick twisted fuck. You think this is erotic? I pity your family if you have one. 1 star for this story and every story you write.

Don't listen to them if they don't like then they should not read. The story was spot on. Keep up the good work!!!

Really a great story and well told. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Sad to read all the Negativity? Great story keep it coming

It nearly exploded straight out of my chest reading this story! That hasn't happened to me in years. Thank you so much!

Story is so far out there and implausible that I cannot waste my time reading any further installments. The characters lack believability and depth. I have to ask what dark person would write such depravity. This goes beyond humiliation and D/s. Personally, the husband should be hung up until he castrates himself.

Great story! Can't wait for the rest!

Does she eventually run away? Does she get the girls to go with her or are they now the daughters of Ms. Harmon?

You write well and you've pretty well done everything to her so - does she finally run away and never to be heard from again or - does she run to the police?

Can't wait for more of this story. I'm loving your work & want more!

This has to be one of the best on this site. I like the way daily life is incorporated into d/s.

Sorry, but this really is difficult to believe. What husband in his right mind would choose an outsider over his wife? I mean she may be great but he does have a wife to deal with... Then she is trying to take the place of Della? Della is letting her misuse her? You kidding me, right? I think Sonya is a tart...a woman that needs to get her own man. She is an exceedingly annoying character. If David wants her so much...why not just divorce Della and why doesn't Della get a life rather than let some tart abuse her? This makes no sense.

PLEASE STOP WRITING!

Sonya was arrested for assault and battery and spent the next 5 years in prison. Della divorced Dave and took the kids. End of sad, unbelievable story.

This story lacks anything to make it interesting, 20 years of marriage thrown away for nothing and two children lives ruined.

I keep scanning this story to see if it turns around and has some redeeming quality. So far, there is none. That so many find enjoyment in the pain and humiliation of another person gives me great concern for the human race. There truly is evil in this world.

stupid story if della and amy had any brains they would already have left the house and moved to another city and found work and a good man not one that lets some slut tell him how to treat his formwr wife and daughter not sure how any man can let some slut treat his daughter like that