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william48william48almost 2 years ago

I am impressed by the way that you have dripfed this story to give a realistic impression of David's time at Casavana with long periods of boredom and depression interspersed with bursts of physical and mental torture.

I am getting very worried about his mental health at this point. All this prolonged physical and mental abuse has got to have long term effects. At least post traumatic stress disorder and probably depression.

No clue what the bitch Becky has in store for him next, probably leaving him for Josh, but whatever it is it can only make his mental health worse

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

How many parts are there to this book?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why during the walk she did not guide him with a leash attached to his balls? In this prison are too prude for my taste

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

After that last sentence I hope the next chapter comes soon...

OllyTOllyTalmost 2 years agoAuthor

There are 22 chapters in this book

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Best thing that could happen is Becky telling him she is leaving him. And it not be a trick. That she is honestly leaving him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

OMFG 22 chapters of this! Can't you just have him top himself in the next chapter or two and then we'll all be happy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Mostly the news is about Becky is pregnant or because of Becky's request the prision time will be extended

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Can’t wait for next instalment. What will Becky’s letter say?

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