All Comments on 'David Ch. 01'

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redlion75redlion75about 9 years ago

so cheating wife or slut of a girlfriend that left james at home waiting for her?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What's gong on? How can we rate a chapter of an unknown plot and characters?

Really poor beginning. She's acting like a slut, and maybe a cheater? Why?

Will wait to rate while you wait to write.

BeeHbeeBeeHbeeabout 9 years agoAuthor

Interesting that both comment say the character is a slut or even a cheater. Would the comment be different if the character was a man???

She's actually a woman who's being wronged in so many ways but has now taken control of her life.

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