All Comments on 'Dax's Doll'

Yuck. Fucking dead bodies?!?

I love how people on this site usually put warnings on the most minor things, and yet this story has no foreword. Pretty well written story, but a little dull because there's no character dynamic. I guess that's necessitated by the fetish, so maybe its just not my thing, but it might have been nice to see some scenes leading up to the kill rather than just the aftermath.