by purefire
The sex was hot, but I liked the fact that they came together as a couple.
After reading this chapter, *I* have a goofy grin on my face. I just love reading about them, and I'm extremely curious about Nadia's conversation with Alexis. Keep up the great work!
She's either going to ask Alexis to sleep with her and get her pregnant. (Don't ask how I came to this conclusion or where it would take the story) or she is going to give Charisma to Zaide. I enjoyed this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
So glad they got their rocks off!! LOL! I thought they were going to kill somebody with all of that pent up tension! I just hope no one dies except Zaide of course!
I don't know what Nadia told Alexis, but I'm dying to find out. :) Great story, great imagination.
you cant get the chapters out quick enough!! it flows and connects really well and i cant help but love it
Loving It. It's such a cohesive story with a steady pace I don't pay attention to any mistakes you've made. I'm hard pressed to come up with any valid constructive critism. So I'll just continue to sit back, relax & enjoy. What's the Nadia's favor from Alexis? Curiousity is just eating me up.
The love scene left me panting... excellent! And I'm dying to know what Nadia has in store for us...