All Comments on 'Dead and Horny Ch. 14'

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Fatlad77Fatlad77over 1 year ago

Dana/Sparks? Was that a Tefler/3SM reference?

CarchariasCarchariasover 1 year ago

β€œI always carry Mace when I go out.”

That made me audibly groan and pinch the bridge of my nose for a few seconds, so… mission accomplished. Five stars.

traskentraskenover 1 year ago

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Again a wonderful continuation! Love it all!

dwoelfledwoelfleover 1 year ago

As Ed Sullivan would have said - wonnerful, wonnerful. Love your work. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I fear for Mike hips and spine when Lily's this pissed off. Fantastic story so far.

Sincerely returning reader.

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 1 year ago

Humph! I feel robbed by that final "page."

Ah well, hopefully the next chapter comes soon.

RayvenCloudRayvenCloudover 1 year ago

It really REALLY is a shame that the television companies had to screw up Firefly so badly, that it only got the one season.. Intentionally showing episodes out of order and never keeping the same air-time, then passing it around more than a side dish at thanksgiving dinner ... Doomed, before it could expose its greatness..

notStanleynotStanleyover 1 year ago

It is always so difficult to craft questions so that you get usable responses :{

ender2k2kender2k2kover 1 year ago

This feels like the start of another great story. Thanks and happy holidays

CarchariasCarchariasover 1 year ago

Fatlad77: Alex (Dana's deceased girlfriend) used to call Dana Sparks. And Tick-tock said she had the spark after she fixed him as a clock. (HFHM chs. 20 and 21)

FbjsFbjsover 1 year ago

My money is of course (n Osgrove being the devil. Interesting then what their sway on the congregation will be... Also looking forward to the Order's puzzle as to how the Oracle got exposed :D

Some good pieces on the board already, eager for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Watched a pirated DVD of Cowboy Bebop anime inspired me to watch firefly / serenity in its entirety

Good yarn as always Ms Hawthorne

SR

skippersdadskippersdadover 1 year ago

I do love all the stories in this arc they all have life .

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknewover 1 year ago

As much as I enjoy HFHM, Dead and Horny episodes always are a treat. Thank you Annebelle!

MonsterLitFanaticMonsterLitFanaticover 1 year ago

If we are starting a pool on who the demon is, here my bet.

Osgrove is a full-blooded human, but he has an 'adviser' who helped him build his megachurch that is actually a demon if greed.

dapidapiover 1 year ago

Mothradamus? How did that slip in there?

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

Brown coats rule! you can't stop the signal. Firefly died too young...

Lissome_LapineLissome_Lapineover 1 year ago

Excellent! Love the tags too

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Always looking for more from you about this crazy world.

Kyron73Kyron73over 1 year ago

As usual, another story that keeps me on the edge of my seat. So happy to have found your stories. Your blend of laughs, myths, sex and drama is out of this world. Thank you.

madcrimsonmadcrimsonover 1 year ago

You can't take the sky from me

christi11christi11over 1 year ago

That was good, thanks for sharing. :)

jman42jman42over 1 year ago

Loved the Firefly/Serenity reference! Maybe work in some Reavers down the road!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Funny Funny, I know who the demon/devil is a load of laughs in this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There is a typo. After Dana and Lily jumped through the portal and the knights followed her the mace should have "shot" out instead of "shout" out. I blame auto correct or grammar checkers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Shiny!

offtoneverneverlandofftoneverneverlandover 1 year ago

great quote from a great movie

Skater6762Skater6762about 1 year ago

Don't think I didn't catch that supernatural reference either. Going to track a demonstration so they can "gank" him? Okay Dean lmao

caitiff1969caitiff1969about 1 year ago

Lives the reference. Caught it immediately.

Well my days of not taking you seriously are certainly coming to a middle.

Raven660Raven660about 1 year ago

Couldn’t believe the firefly reference. Was reading that like no way she threw a firefly reference in. Then a sentence later I was in no doubt about the author being a brown coat.

DMMWolfDMMWolf12 months ago

Just saying... you are tracking a demon and all the arrogance that breed entails... its the man with the microphone...

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I'm loving the geeky punniness and any Browncoat is a friend of mine, by all means keep those dad jokes, geeky comments and Firefly/Serenity quotes coming or I swear by my pretty floral bonnet my days of taking serious may certainly come to a middle

=)

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

While I had a good time with Firefly/Serenity shows I don't understand so much hipe about the reference unless you all are at a fan level equal o greater to the ones od the preacher Dana and Lily are gping to meet in two days.

I liked the infiltration op3ration to Oracle. And Tasia's bacground story and set.

It look all our girls are going to have a harcore party.

Procurator9Procurator99 months ago

Oh nice we're gonna have a reunion...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜

Procurator9Procurator99 months ago

🀭 Lilly cracked my up ...again...

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I hope Tasia gives Sister Courtney the business. Hopefully while Sister Courtney is being bratty and has her face pressed into a wall.

Also, the almighty Oracle asking Dana to step back a bit so that the microphone can pick her up is a funny little moment.

In addition, it seems like the Oracle is the Mothman, and my dense brain didn’t realize it until you laid it on really thick.

Lastly, imposter sus amogus

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Love me a firefly reference. I make them all the time. And people just never get them. Is brown coats need to stick together in this verse

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Big damned heroes, that’s what the house crew are.

JodailyJodaily4 months ago

"Things will get sticky for one of our heroes'. Ooh, sticky can be good πŸ˜œπŸ˜‚

GentlemanWriterGentlemanWriterabout 1 month ago

The Firefly reference was perfect!

DManganDMangan27 days ago

I love you for the Serenity reference.

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