by writerannabelle
βI always carry Mace when I go out.β
That made me audibly groan and pinch the bridge of my nose for a few seconds, so⦠mission accomplished. Five stars.
As Ed Sullivan would have said - wonnerful, wonnerful. Love your work. Thank you.
I fear for Mike hips and spine when Lily's this pissed off. Fantastic story so far.
Sincerely returning reader.
Humph! I feel robbed by that final "page."
Ah well, hopefully the next chapter comes soon.
It really REALLY is a shame that the television companies had to screw up Firefly so badly, that it only got the one season.. Intentionally showing episodes out of order and never keeping the same air-time, then passing it around more than a side dish at thanksgiving dinner ... Doomed, before it could expose its greatness..
It is always so difficult to craft questions so that you get usable responses :{
Fatlad77: Alex (Dana's deceased girlfriend) used to call Dana Sparks. And Tick-tock said she had the spark after she fixed him as a clock. (HFHM chs. 20 and 21)
My money is of course (n Osgrove being the devil. Interesting then what their sway on the congregation will be... Also looking forward to the Order's puzzle as to how the Oracle got exposed :D
Some good pieces on the board already, eager for more!
Watched a pirated DVD of Cowboy Bebop anime inspired me to watch firefly / serenity in its entirety
Good yarn as always Ms Hawthorne
SR
As much as I enjoy HFHM, Dead and Horny episodes always are a treat. Thank you Annebelle!
If we are starting a pool on who the demon is, here my bet.
Osgrove is a full-blooded human, but he has an 'adviser' who helped him build his megachurch that is actually a demon if greed.
As usual, another story that keeps me on the edge of my seat. So happy to have found your stories. Your blend of laughs, myths, sex and drama is out of this world. Thank you.
Loved the Firefly/Serenity reference! Maybe work in some Reavers down the road!
There is a typo. After Dana and Lily jumped through the portal and the knights followed her the mace should have "shot" out instead of "shout" out. I blame auto correct or grammar checkers.
Don't think I didn't catch that supernatural reference either. Going to track a demonstration so they can "gank" him? Okay Dean lmao
Lives the reference. Caught it immediately.
Well my days of not taking you seriously are certainly coming to a middle.
Couldnβt believe the firefly reference. Was reading that like no way she threw a firefly reference in. Then a sentence later I was in no doubt about the author being a brown coat.
Just saying... you are tracking a demon and all the arrogance that breed entails... its the man with the microphone...
I'm loving the geeky punniness and any Browncoat is a friend of mine, by all means keep those dad jokes, geeky comments and Firefly/Serenity quotes coming or I swear by my pretty floral bonnet my days of taking serious may certainly come to a middle
=)
While I had a good time with Firefly/Serenity shows I don't understand so much hipe about the reference unless you all are at a fan level equal o greater to the ones od the preacher Dana and Lily are gping to meet in two days.
I liked the infiltration op3ration to Oracle. And Tasia's bacground story and set.
It look all our girls are going to have a harcore party.
I hope Tasia gives Sister Courtney the business. Hopefully while Sister Courtney is being bratty and has her face pressed into a wall.
Also, the almighty Oracle asking Dana to step back a bit so that the microphone can pick her up is a funny little moment.
In addition, it seems like the Oracle is the Mothman, and my dense brain didnβt realize it until you laid it on really thick.
Lastly, imposter sus amogus
Love me a firefly reference. I make them all the time. And people just never get them. Is brown coats need to stick together in this verse