All Comments on 'Dead and Horny Ch. 19'

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GrmPAGrmPAabout 1 month ago

Honk, honk motherfucker. Seriously, the best fiction writing I've seen on the interweb. I should be spending time with my grandkids or attending to my health or doing my taxes or working on my Gravely collection or reorganizing my hoarded shit but here I am reading your wonderful inventive prose. Oh well, I'll finish D&H then Book 8 of HfHM...THEN do something worthwhile. Loving it Annabelle.

ClearmuseClearmuse3 months ago

Loving the side stories, just as much as others. Write what inspires you!

YourNeighbourYourNeighbour3 months ago

I think Tasia needs a hug and some Love and acceptance.

If she joins the Household it will be fun. You could have fun interactions between the catgirl, the foxgirl, and the wolfgirl.

Roseboom65Roseboom654 months ago

*honk* I give everything in the HFHM 5 stats because this is absolutely positively hands down the best shit I have ever read, and I have read a lot. Please keep writing! 🙏

JodailyJodaily4 months ago

5 stars aren't enough, but that's what you get. This was a great, fun, chapter. And what a hoot! Unlikely coupling, zombie and werewolf, but hey, whatever gets you (us) off 😜. It is a fun sidebar from HFHM, and it took me a while to really warm to it, but.now I can't stop! Carry on. Judging by the ratings, I think we're all enjoying it.

CherrypahhaCherrypahha4 months ago

I love this arc of the story! Please write the witch & we’rewolf into the HFHM?

rvagirlrvagirl4 months ago

Aileen is hot. I want Mike to ask Tink to build an addition for her, Dana, and Tasia to move into. Preferably with lots of space in the yard for Tas to run.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

This story is great. Like nothing I've seen before. I'll be following your other works as well. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I love this series. Please write more of this one and leave the other series alone for some time? Please?

SeidmadrSeidmadr5 months ago

Honk honk!

And this is amazing! This is my first time reading through this and I absolutely love it! Your stories are amazing, and are rapidly becoming one of my favourite pieces of fiction period!

abiostudent3abiostudent35 months ago

I absolutely love her and I hope the house has a place for a resident witch!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

HONKA HONKA

Love the series. More of your main-series fans should DEFINITELY read this, fleshes out Lily and Dana an exceptional amount.

CoucyCoucy6 months ago

I love that you introduce librarians as a character type. This is the best.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I love this series. I think this side series is really fleshing out Lily and Dana and a good place to introduce new characters and provide context.

Now, I can somewhat understand why it’s not as popular as the main series. I very much like Lily, but I’m not so much a fan of Dana. Furthermore, I’d say that more people are on the sexual spectrum closer to heterosexual and this series is predominantly sapphic. It’s not a problem, but it is a smaller community, even in a niche community of nonhuman kinks

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Honkaroonie

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

HONK! :D

-AT

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot8 months ago

I give this story 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 and at least 20 👍 (I can't figure an emoji for honks, but it would get plenty) ☺

rocketdragonrocketdragon8 months ago

Do people really not like this series and complain about it vs the main one??? Not that I'd ever say *anything* bad about HFHM; but Dead and Horny is possibly my favorite series ever. You the best!!

And yes, your tags are also the best :D

Look_At_My_Massive_PlotLook_At_My_Massive_Plot9 months ago

Honk, honk, motherfuckers! You're tags always make me laugh, I look forward to seeing what sort of mischief you've put in there for us.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved this chapter. Very hot sex scene. Honk Honk

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Honk, honk, mofos!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

5 stars. Honk! :)

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Honk!

DarkFire8687DarkFire868710 months ago

Honk, lol. Love seeing the new tags at the end <3.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Awwwww I hope our librarian witch gets some love later

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Dana might get some low level lifeforce from Mortals.

The thing with Mike is, its pure magic, for the same effect she would need someone like the three end characters of book six ( S, F, H and maybe H and Y ) I try not to spoil .. oh and possibly Beth

slimfrenchieslimfrenchie10 months ago

Hope the librarian makes it to the main story as a recurring character. [The pup too] HONK! ... and this... goose-girl?

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Not being an expert on female biology, human or otherwise, I wondered if Dana could not get some "life force" from Tasia's vaginal juices, the same as Dana got from Tasia's blood.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I like Aileen. I hope they’re able to help her and that maybe she’ll show up in more adventures.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Honk!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Honk ! Honk ! Love you Annabelle

mharrisonmharrison11 months ago

Amazing stuff as always.

Absolutely love it.....

Many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Honk

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Have been enjoying hfhm for years and felt the need to follow the girls on there adventures. Really happy I did. Please keep them coming……

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Honk

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The only thing to not like about these stories is having to wait for the next one to be published!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Ooohhh and honk....of course 👌😉

TazzdevillnlTazzdevillnl11 months ago

Dammit...now I have to back to previous chapters to rate it. Too eager to read the next part. I just love it.

Great ratio of story/excitement/sex and always well reseacherd without walking down cliche road (like I am now 😆). Too bad that the sex part isn't accepted in the narrow minded so called real world, because I'm convinced you would otherwise be properly reccognised for your talent.

ContrahentContrahent11 months ago

Honkityhonkhonk i always read the tags.

Thanks for writing these stories. this is a really fun side story in the HFHM universe.

HentaiWolfHentaiWolf11 months ago

Love this kinda want to learn more about Eileen as well she seems like she could use some friends.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

*Honk*

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Are you ok? It's been a week and your bio hasn't been updated :(

madcrimsonmadcrimson12 months ago

Honk!

I loved the dive into Tasia's past and orifices.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Excellent chapter! Got me excited to see where Tasia fits in with the rest of the HFHM crew

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Zombies, vampires, werewolves, demons, and worst of all televangelist what more could you ask for.

Honk if you're horny.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Hmmm… do I sense a new Radley family librarian in the future? Eagerly awaiting the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Loved it!! Please let Tasia join the HFHM Family, Dana needs a girlfriend and Mike needs another horny monster girl in his harem. Please Annabelle. I know you are really busy with family life. Please let the stories CUM a lot sooner and more often.

Thanks again for your Amazing Stories!!

I also think you should add more chapters to Last of her kind. Especially about the kids.

Keep up the good work.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Sending you horny love from Birmingham Alabama.

SorchakSorchak12 months ago

Honk! I can't believe somebody would pass up reading another great series by writerannabelle. Oh well, their loss. Got a kick out of the tags, again. The 'read the carfax' and 'no food in the car' are my favorites.

Ynottony72Ynottony7212 months ago

Thank you. Love you and your work

Redneck_390Redneck_39012 months ago

Honk!

Now I'm hoping Dana and Tasia end up as a couple, they're just adorable together! ❤️

DwarfLord50DwarfLord5012 months ago

I love that this story puts a different group of characters in the spotlight. HFHM is getting a bit crowded and some of my favorite characters don’t get as much “screen time” as I would like. Anyway, thanks for keeping us entertained!

Bluesea00Bluesea0012 months ago

Tasia is joining the house?

By the way great story.😃

Lenny20Lenny2012 months ago
Big step

Additional to the great sex scene between Dana and Tasia, it was a really great moment to see the paralells of both of their journeys to power. And Dana sharing her undead condition with someone outside the family was really a big step for her. I wonder if somehow that could come into play with the order-plot line ...

The old-world / new-world vampire lore also is really interessting, hope it comes more into play in the future.

Thanks again for a great chapter.

PeryitePeryite12 months ago

Honk! Always love when a new chapter drops.

MCRidersClubMCRidersClub12 months ago

Honk! Another great chapter in an amazing story. The interplay between the characters is just as compelling as the storyline itself. As others have mentioned, I hope there is a happy ending for Tasia and she becomes a permanent part of the Radleyverse.

elphantasmo69elphantasmo6912 months ago

Hold up... things are ABOUT to get messy? LOL - I thought the ladies were already in epic clusterf**k territory!

MadDannyZMadDannyZ12 months ago

Wonderful work. Love the swapping of stories of these two. Like the connection being formed from it.

LunegirleeLunegirlee12 months ago

Ohhh I hate it when ever a chapter ends.

🥰🥰🥰🥰

Lissome_LapineLissome_Lapine12 months ago

Thank you for including queer human/witch representation! Delightful as always

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honk, honk!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Super hot sex scene, so well written. My girlfriend and I totally relived in on top of her Subaru parked off NC3. Fucking hot! Even enjoyed her finger in my ass! 5-Stars

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great, as they always are.

H_RoarkH_Roark12 months ago

I guess it wouldn't hurt for Dana to reveal she tried to save Amida and at the very least recovered his body. I think that would maybe give some closure to Tasia or more of a connection to Dana. I would have thought a taste of Dana would give the vampyr more than a bad taste in his mouth. I'm guessing if Tasia comes back home with Dana and moves in with Cyrus there might be some 'splainin' to do on Cyrus part.

Would be interesting if Tasia's dad decided to find out what happened to his little girl and had a go with Timotei. Could even see the look on his face when Dana drives the stake in Timotei. Maybe rescue Tasia from a control spell once again. Or that might be too repetitive. I'm sure you'll have even better ideas.

Keep up the good work. Enjoy your break and look forward to the next installment.

Newt0351Newt035112 months ago

Every time I get to the end I scream "NO". I want it all and I want it to never end. The beginning was very hot. I also really like this witch and hope we get to have her join the HFHM family full time at some point. I think she could help everyone with her skills as well as our dead girl. Maybe we can get a wolf girl to join also, who knows.

Still love the world you have created and thank you for sharing.

RobcolesRobcoles12 months ago

They really need to enable a higher score on lit, just for your stories. I’m caught between hoping these stories never end but also hoping I live long enough to make it to the end if, heaven-forbid, they ever do. It’s a happy conundrum 😜

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Can't say am a fan of the side storys feels like It's diluting the main story too much.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I love your stories. I dont know why people who read the main story wouldn't enjoy this one too. Keep up the amazing work.

JazHazJazHaz12 months ago

Oh and honk honk!

JazHazJazHaz12 months ago

Been having trouble remembering where we are in the story, but enjoying each chapter as it comes. Will Tasia become an ally and move into the house, I like her?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Can't wait for tink to go wild on the wolf girl, she has the most creative swear words ever. Honk

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A lily and tasia fuck scene would be such a mess. The order has dealt with dragons and keeping them half asleep yet Mike's island is dealing with one? Okay. Who tf is the curator? Save my Lily

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

More More and More Please!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Another fun story. Honk the tags. If readers are skipping those, they are missing the toppings on the hair pie.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honk and Hornky

confused about one part, didn't think Vamps had a pulse? I know some artificial hearts move blood through the body with no pulse, is that what a vamp's heart does and what the stake interrupts?

SensualSigmaSensualSigma12 months ago

Honk. Dear diary, today I learned about mukbang and realised humanity is even weirder than I already thought, and that was quite a lot.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Lunchbox90 I'd keep quiet about your little death cult in light of recent tragedys if i were you.

redwhitredwhit12 months ago

Honk! Honk honk! Dang it Dana, move it to the back seat.

TaradarTaradar12 months ago

Honk hoonnnkkk!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

D&H is really awesome I can't wait for the next chapter. I can not wait to see how this ties in with home for horny monsters. I really like Tasia and I hope you keep her around. Having her destroy the sons of sin would be the icing on the cake. I really miss mimic though. Keep up the awesome work!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill6912 months ago

Your stories are the best!!!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honk :-)

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great chapter! Finally some descriptive sex that lasts more than a couple of lines! Hopefully the main story can benefit from this approach!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Just gets better every episode

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honk honk!

Can't believe I hadn't noticed the tags until recently when someone commented on them. Need to go back and reread everything now...

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Don't get me wrong l, I love your main story but your side stories are the main attraction to me. I adored the arachnid one, definitely top three of everything I've read. And I'm thoroughly enjoying this one! Immensely grateful for everything you write and share, especially the weirder, more experimental stuff. Please keep 'm coming!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

An interesting development between Dana and Tasha. Looking forward to seeing were this goes. Still puzzled about what exactly Ledgion is. A very interesting story, can’t wait to see how it turns out.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honk!

Arc2456Arc245612 months ago

Loved it, another wonderful chapter.

I like the idea dhojo had about having Aileen join the group

bhojobhojo12 months ago

the home needs a witch and Aileen needs to join. loved the sexy werewolf zombie hookup. now we need a lesbian threesome

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Honk!

The tags are the best!

LoverbullLoverbull12 months ago

I do. I love the fokin tags. Also 5 stars.

dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew12 months ago

A very rich tale you are weaving, very rich and tasty. Even without glutens...

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