All Comments on 'Dead and Horny Ch. 21'

Freakin awesome! I pictured myself at the end as one of the mercenaries seeing all the insanity and monstrousness unfolding around them, and the level of terror was intense. Love our good monsters, but I surely wouldn’t want to get on their bad side! Very curious to learn more about the Curator, wondering what will happen to the Deacons daughter (who I’m thinking may be deaf/mute?), and still hoping for some kind of gentle release for the vampire child. Also made my teeth gnash wanting to see what the Sumbitches at the House are facing after this fight scene. Your humor makes the story sooo much better than if you’d written it straight. Love it all!

Annabelle, you are a brilliant writer. Sorry about Marvel. It’s like they’ve became hyper-woke and Puritan at the same time.

This is so brilliant! Thank you so much!

Fun all around.

Thank you again. Love your writing

Do much good fun. Thank you as always.

Drink lemon water.

It helps cure hangover, not coffee

Yoooooo what the actual fuck. I usually enjoy your cliff hangers but you were wrong for this one

Oh baby! I think the sons of sin are in for a world of hurt if they have to face these ladies!!! Completely can't wait to read about legion getting utterly destroyed!

How big was the ‘1 glass of wine’ ? I bet it was like my ‘cooks glass’ 500ml / 2/3 of a bottle size glass. But that’s me…

Lovely story, well done & plz keep it up.

Aw shit, it's on now!!!

This is a double edged sword. It's entirely down to luck that none of the zombies so far attacked the doggy.

ROFL. Roll for initiative!!!

Love it

I really enjoyed the story, laughing aloud at parts, especially the chaos unleashed at the end. I'm just upset that I now have to wait a month to find out how the battle ends, if Legend Prime is identified (I think it might be the Deacon's daughter), and who the Curator is. Your writing is the best, keeping my interest, even without a sex scene.

If the winery issue is not a literary trick to be in communion with the chapter I hope that whoever was with you forgive the time it take to publish this one and you can resume enjoying the time together.ˊ

Who is this Curator capable to transform a brave werewolf in a frightened  puppy?

Will him reach to see the unleashed zombi armagedon and our four girls? Or will he depart oblivious?

Thank you for calming my reading hunter.

By th way FirstClassFlirt comment have very god points.

Eulalie is fear, Tasia it's terror, Lily is chaos, and Dana is horror. Nice.

Perfect. Thank you for sharing. 5* Slainté

T.J.Skywind from my Kindle

Thank you Mrs Hawthorne for indulging us

As always another great chapter. Can’t wait for the next. You just have to love Lily, my favorite monster.

Lilly pointing at the zombie army made up of sunday dress zombies, this ! this is why you cant have nice things, see what it does to you !? Bad legion bad ! *spray bottle of holy water to the face**

Magnificent!

You never disappoint!

More, more, more, please and thank you!

Scrolling down and adding 5 stars anyway beforee reading, and totlally not cos im tipsy

seriously though keep it up, one of my favourite authors on this site and in general

Much love from the bottom of the world

also, marvel Wishes they could write as well as you

Surprise + Magical weapon (and its pluses) + Magical creatures (X3) vs cast of hundreds

Awesome initiative bonus

Catharsis for a favorite character getting it in the story arc.

Oh you deliver Ms Hawthorne...IN SPADES

SR

I think Annabelle had Marvel on the brain because she's doing a monster hero team pose at at end. Shoulda brought two more in.

The tables have turned. Can't wait for the next episode.

Nothing like a zombie outbreak. Turn Legend in on himself. Hee hee hee!

This was fun. Can't wait for next time.

So is the Curator another player in the great game? The naming convention fits. I’ll bet he’s also the one hunting down senior Order members.

I wish I had another hundred chapters to read. Thank you for all the great reading and while I don’t want you to hurry any of your creative processes, places don’t dawdle,lol! More more more please!

The best part of this chapter was Eulalie entering the room, and Tasia's reaction.

Hope Grace likes to play with Tasia.

I love your stories, but one entry a month for the two stories is killing me.

Not sure how AH has managed to get an arachnaphobiac to chew for an eight legged freak!

The story is great. I just don't want to wait any longer as the chaos is unfolding.

Another great chapter.

Can't wait for the next install of this story.five ⭐.

So next months Installments will mark half a Decade of your amazing Stories on this platform. I am looking forward to some sort of Party, among the characters when they celebrate the victory of this battle. That said, All your stories are amazing and in many ways insightful for us Si-Fi fans. Please Keep up the amazing story line and the adventure. 5 stars, because they will not allow one to put down 10 out of 10 LOVE YOUR WORK

striving for rocket fuel is good, you just keep getting better and better

Wanna see more of Mace in action really. I miss tick tock. Can't believe we finally unleashed zombie virus, I wonder what happened when Dana zoned out. So glad LaLa gets to kick ass. Hope timotei doesn't die so he can go after curator

another brilliant chapter

The tags to this story... lol

Very good as usual but I really wish you had stopped before the shit hit the fan or finished the fight.

YOU are brilliant!

Wow another great chapter,love your stories.

"Roll for initiative!"

"I punch the initiative."

Wait, wrong fandom. Ah, who am I kidding, Brick would love the fight that I predict is coming.

I am totally loving everything we're learning about The Curator, chilling!

Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.

You FORGOT about us and posted it a day LATE?!?!?! Then I'm not reading this chapter. A second time right away like I always do. I will wait a day. Another fantastic story, even if you are back to leaving us on a cliffhanger (I thought you got "over" that on your last HFHM chapter?). Now I have to wait a day to reread this story and then go through the withdrawals of waiting for your next release... Can't wait!

Paul

Well Tasia handled that introduction much easier than I expected.

I can't wait for Mikes reaction to these escapades.

You have me on the edge of my seat again awaiting the next installments of HFHM and D&H.

Fantastic chapter. One of the funniest you've written.

Always looking forward to the next chapter.

Damn girl - really? I thought that was going to get real, but it turned into “Tune in next (week? month? I haven’t checked your bio, ugh!), same arachnid time, same succubus channel, to find out what happens!” Howsomever, excellent (heck, I’ll say it - exemplary) story/writing, I hope your “IRL” stuff is all good and centered around finding enough banks to make sure your $$$$ are all FDIC insured. Thanks for sharing your visions with us!

Hi Annabelle and everyone!

I loved this chapter, and I'm glad that the girls' half-hearted attempt at reason and flight failed due to the dastardly actions of the villains.

Now it's a 3 way match between Mike's Monster Mash (a team of strong individuals, who may be lacking some oil in the gears for training but more than compensate it with raw power, and now numbers, the only unknown will be their rookie who just got drafted from the technical staff), Deacon's Dastardly Demons (they were leading current season with pure numbers on their side, and a strong holy/unholy attack line but the recent mercato has been unfavorable to them, loosing their main striker's contract and their numbers advantage), and the Cunt Cursed Curator (this team of one just got demoted from Player's League, but their reputation and physical prowesses are still way over what can be expected for a normal game)!

But wait! There's even more unknowns to the game! Will the zombies show any kind of loyalty to Mike's Monster Mash team? Will Deacon's Dastardly Demons manage to salvage their vampyr at the last minute or will he join another team? What about the Order's Outsiders Organization (who have lost or drawn most of their games so far, but are known to have near unlimited ressources, despite the transfer of their star player to Mike's Monster Mash)? Can they also join the game and wreak further havock?

The only way to find out is to stay tuned to the game. We'll have a short ad break of a month and see you then!

I am getting concerned ...

Tasia doesn't appear at Hhm.

as always you get trappedwith your characters. excelent!

My Favorite part (the story itself is my favorite favorite 🤗) is reading your beginning words for every chapter I missed that on Wattpad.

NNOOOOOO!!!!

Can't stop there!!!

Damn it I read through it to quick again!!!

You fair lady are evil!!!

Love it!!!

Oh Annabelle, Annebelle, so much deliciousness in this chapter! From "Dead and horny. You should put that on your dating profile" to "Roll for initiative, bitches!", there are so many good lines! Thank you once again for sharing your imagination with us.

I don't think it's a question anymore who the best writer on this site is. It's obvious it's you Annabelle.

Amazing story, the best chapter in dead and horny part 2 so far!!!! Still needs a sex scene though.....we could have seen how Dana would have made Tasia scream her name in the swamp!!?? No reason not to have one?

I thought Tasia would attack immediately after have you laid eggs, to try and end the arachs once more. Glad she finally unbunched her knickers

The other champions in the Great Game are certainly starting to take an interest in The Caretaker now. We have The Curator in D&H and The Captain in HFHM…just wonder when The Conqueror will make an appearance…got to say I LOVE the clue to these players given all the way back in Ch.72 of HFHM!!!

I’m so ready for monster girl avengers, you have no idea.

Eheh. Heh heh. Ha ha ha. Ah ha ha ha. Bwahahahaha! Who'd have thought that the way to fight a demon possession apocalypse would be to start a zombie apocalypse?! Only Annabelle. *hits the floor in proper dogeza and chants "We're not worthy! We're not worthy!"

I shall wait as patiently as possible for the next chapter.

So you're actually the only writer I follow on here, and I'm never disappointed with your stories. That said, your closing about going for rocket fuel over gasoline was wonderful. It's what I try to do anytime I write, and hopefully I'll start to have more time to finish a few of my stories as well. Keep on trucking you beautiful artisté!

Eulalie reminds me of Charlie from Supernatural played by Felicia Day!

You have an absolutely captivating writing style that just leaves your followers breathless waiting for your next chapter!!!!

Thank you so much for the excellent word smithing!!

Didn’t see that coming at all

HFHM has been my favorite story since I stumbled across it. TLOHK quickly secured a place in my heart as a touching (albeit unusual) love story. D&H though has grown on me. The extra character development of these badass women is such a joy to experience! Lily is always a riot and paired with Dana and her personality development, it's a masterpiece in the making. Ah but Eulalie has quickly become one of my favorite characters and she fits so well in the monster girl squad.

Thank you for all your work!

PS, I really hope tasia finds her way into HFHM in the future.....

Please tell me your humming the tune “Monster Mash” as your writing the next chapter. It got stuck in my head as I pictured where this adventure was going. Really glad Eulalie gets to join the fun. I will be waiting patiently for the next instalment.

Can't wait to see Eulalie in action next chapter. But I'm hopeful that she will regret killing people, she just isn't the person to just kill some random dudes to get what she wants.

The Curator will cartainly become either the big antagonist for D&H part 3 or sometime in the main HFHM universe. I just can't picture a guy like THAT to just be introduced and killed of in a matter of a few chapters. And I'm curious what kind of monster he is, maybe some minor god in human form or another Caretaker with some serious issues.

Also, what was it with a part of the order selling creatures out to the Curator? I suppose that will become a bigger point eventually as well.

Either way, this chapter really set the tone for the finally in the next (few?) chapters. Take all of those 5 stars.

Ugh! Now I have to wait another month for the melée. Very awesome. 👍👍

Dude, AH, I was reading a couple chapters back and when I got to the sex scene where Tasia and Dana first boned, I was legit confused. I totally forgot that this is technically a porno story. I was like "Huh? An explicit sex scene?"

Not a complaint about number of sex scenes. I think you're doing fine there. More like a compliment on the quality of your story.

FYI I love your author intro and outro segments.

Damn, thought I’d finish this book before bed, but now I have to wait for the next chapter 😭😭😭. 5*s

“You’re dead and horny” roll credits. Also did Dana start a zombie horde while making a fingering joke?

👀

🤔Ride of the Valkyries would be a good soundtrack 😉

All I want is for someone to start playing "Dead Girl Superstar" by Rob Zombie when the battle kicks off.

Also hoping that the Curator turns out be some kind of Dr. Frankenstein-type player.

I know you said the next chapter drops the weekend of the 2nd, and today is only the 1st, but i keep hitting refresh because i cant wait. I think for the first time i'm more excited for the next chapter of d&h than the main series, which is saying a lot! The main series continues firing on all cylinders with nitrous and afterburners! I dont really know anything about cars, but i want to say "dual overhead cams" too, just for emphasis.

In reply to 2 anons ago, I've been kinda leaning towards hoping he's Frankenstein's actual monster. That'd be awesome!

Gasoline? Rocket fuel?

Think you are working your way up FOOF!

https://www.science.org/content/blog-post/things-i-won-t-work-dioxygen-difluoride

As always very good, I don't post many comments, though I would let you know I am living proof of something higher. I had surgery for kidney cancer, while in the hospital I had a heart attack, spent 2 months in the hospital, currently on dialysis, but still going on, persevere and keep going forward

Awesome chapter!!

Had me on the edge of my seat, waiting for what comes next.

5 stars as always! Love it!

Yah, Eulalie is Charlie from Supernatural.... but a Spider.

Fucking epic reverse zombie apocalypse

OK OK OK --- that final line made me laugh out loud!!!

Besides discussing the epicness that was just unleashed, I’d like to take a second and thank you for the words coming from you as a person - both the fores and the afters. You’ve created something amazing here and your talent and drive and generosity are all self evident in both what you’re doing and how you’re doing it. For probably the first half of this series I ignored your forewords and afterwords to get to the action. I was ready for more shenanigans. I doubt I’m alone there. The shenanigans are quite good. But once I started to read the words you wrote us - just person to person - I treasured the story so much more. So thank you for sharing with us and connecting with us, and letting us know we are welcome and that there is someone happy to know us. I believe it’s more important than you can possibly know and would hazard a guess that it’s a key component of your success.

Wow that was a lot.

P.S. sorry for not discussing how epic that last part was. Just incredibly satisfying. So thanks for that too.

Fuck yeah!

"Player four has enter the game." "Roll for initiative, bitches!" Absolutely incredible. I f'ing love this story. I love this world you've made. And I love every one of the people that you've put in it.

Love you stories!

Bitchin bitches!!

YESSS!

Rocket fuel gets two thumbs up from me