All Comments on 'Dead Lift'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
pre cumming

That was an awesome story dammmm made me so hard and just ..... dammmm

wolf9696wolf9696about 8 years ago
4/5

really liked.... damn awesome story... would have given you 5 stars... but your grammar and spelling ruined quite a bit of it... you need an editor. Will wait to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome

Loved this story and like the fact that you left it open to be continued while also leaving so many avenues for it to progress down, looking forward to future installments

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
chapter 2?

loved the story. really hoping for a sequel. thanks for sharing!

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